Writing an essay in 600-650 words

CCN 1043 English for Academic Studies (Health Studies)! Outline *The items in boldface are compulsory. 101 Name

ORDER A PLAGIARISM FREE PAPER NOW

Broad Topic Area Specific Topic Focus (tick one) Chan Cheuk in Phoebe Class Lack of Health Staffs in Hong Kong Shortage of Healthcare Professions Leads to Inefficient Health System Causes Positive Effects Negative Effects Similarities Differences 8 INTRODUCTION Hook Connecting Information Thesis Statement overview ? си Hong Kong Lack of medical staff cause many dangerous medical accidents. not complete sentence 2 BODY Topic Sentence 1: Causes Positive Effects ✓ Negative Effects Similarities Differences Insufficient medical staff working inefficiently. Supporting Material (Complete sentences): (a) Lack of medical staff increases nurses and doctor’s workload (b) Because of the shortage of health professions, leads to medical staffs physically exhausted. (c) Medical staff has huge workload, causes carelessness to patients. Lulet are the effects Topic Sentence 2: Causes | Positive Effects Negative Effects Similarities Differences Long waiting period decreases patients health condition. Supporting Material (Complete sentences): (a) Bad quality of healthcare receiving. (b) Cause long time to receive healthcare service, caught patient anxiety, (c) Emergency department overcrowded. Topic Sentence 3: I causes Positive Effects ✓ Negative Effects Similarities Differences Challenges for Hong Kong healthcare system and government. Supporting Material (Complete sentences): Tal Healthcare professions keep falling. same B1 + B2 are already the challenges (b) Government receiving tons of complaint of healthcare system. (c) Aging population, staff shortage at all levels. CONCLUSION (1) Re-statement of the main idea and (2) a suggestion, opinion, or prediction general terms Please w write your B3 needs rewritings rdees in complete gentences!!! Please rewrite B2 by finding a new body pocast 1
Purchase answer to see full attachment